Saturday, May 26, 2012

One of my Dreams

Okay this is my first four pages of one of my story's I hope you all like it...(haven't given it a title yet still thinking on that):




Darkness surrounds you, you can't see, you can't breath.

Your heart is racing, your blood pounding in your ears.

Someone is after you, their trying to hurt you, so you run faster.

You call out for help but, nothing comes out, not a scream, not a cry of help.

As you feel something wet, something warm, you place your hand over your chest.

Blood...your blood, now covered in it...your own blood...you look at the person.

A man with beautiful eyes, long silkily hair, and a well built body catches you as you begin to fall.

You say “Do I know you?” and he replies with “No” but something tells you that you do

Falling water you think it's raining but then you realize it's not rain but tears he's crying for you.

You look at him and he says “Please don't die.” and you say “Why? nothing left to live for and no one really cares.”

Those beautiful eyes now glinted with pain “But I care.” you think to yourself but why do you care.

Then out of nowhere he gives you a kiss, a kiss that said I care for you, I want you, a kiss so powerful the heavens sang

Call it what you want, call it what you wish, magic, fate but you stop bleeding, you can breath, you can see.

You open your eyes to see your friends and family all around you.


“Oh, thank the gods your alive.” relied my mother

All I could do was smile at her “The gods blessed you with an angel my child.” said my father who was whipping the tears from his eyes

“What do you mean dad?” I said trying to sit up, “who saved me?” that's when I saw him the man with the beautiful eyes, long silky hair and a built body now I remember this man had saved me from death

“Your alive.” he said kneeling next to my bed

“Yes, thank to you.” I replied with a tired smile, that's when my doctor came in and asked everyone to leave so I could rest I looked at the beautiful man and said “Will you come back?”

With a smile he said “Yes, I will be back.” as he walked out and closed the door be hind him.


Later on that night the man that saved my life came in the room “Hey how are you doing?”

“I am doing okay,” I said trying to sit up, “So who are you?”

“My name is Zenith.” he said softly placing his head on my bed

“Well, Zenith I thank you for saving my life.” I said patting his head, “but why did you save me you could have just left me like everyone else did?”

“Because I am suppose to protect you.” he said turning his head so my hand could slide down the side of his face

“Protect me? Who told you to do that?” I said hopping my family had nothing to do with this beautiful creature sitting at my beside

“I was sent by your goddess and also her brothers.” he said

All the pain killers they had me on all I could do was smile and pet him some more “Zenith do you think my god's know what they are doing?”

“I hope so little one I hope so.” he said smiling back at me

The next time I opened my eye Zenith was gone and a tall green eyed man was standing in my hospital room I sat up with all the power I could call upon and said in not so friendly voice “Who are you?”

“You don't know who I am child?”

Looking up at him I rolled my eyes and said “Should I know who you are old man? All I know is your in a very dangerous room old man.” as my eyes started to change colors and my hair began to cover my hole body

“Calm your self avatar of Freya, There is no need to get defensive I have only come to see if my sister is alright.”

“How did you know what I was? And what do you mean sister?”

“Do you know who I am know or do I have to show you?”

Still giving him a blank look he took a deep sigh, shook his head and changed into Balder The god of light, joy, purity, beauty, innocence, and reconciliation. My eyes changed colors and then I smiled up at him, he coma down and hugged me “We where so worried about you sister.”

“I am alright just wish I could go home already.”

“You know you can't.”

“I know Balder my host is human and has to heal, but she is a fast healer, she has all ready healed up from the accident.”

“Really...Father picked a good one for you this time.”

“Yes he did but do you think he know that there was two other gods using her as a avatar?”

Balder stood there and thought for a moment know their father had some reason for not telling his sister that this was some other gods vessel,but it there father he always has a good reason for what he dose “I am sure father didn't know but you can handle it right?”

“Of course I can handle it brother.”

That's when the door opened and I looked at the door to see three men come in I looked back to where Balder was standing and he was gone, So knowing what that meant I pretended to be asleep slightly closing my eyes.

“Damn it! She's still alive.”

“How could that be? She should have died when the car blow up.”

“I don't know, but we can't let her live.”

They looked at each other and pulled out sword my heart pounded in my chest as all I could think was I want to be with my family and as they brought their swords down I blinked out of the room

“Damn it! She wasn't asleep!”

“We need to find her.”

“Right.”

They put their swords away and walked out of my hospital room “Sir how are we going to find her?”

“Will call in the hunter.”

When I opened my eyes I was at home in bed blinking because I couldn't believed it worked. I slowly got out of bed and walked out the door no one saw, or heard me until my daughter came running at me yelling “Mommy!” I picked her up as everyone turned around to see me in the hole way my husband and my boyfriend both came running at me

“What the hell how did you get in the bed room?”

“I was being attacked in my hospital room and all I could think of was being here with you guys and poof I was in the room.”



Give me some time to write the rest of it, my mind has been jumping from story to story so one day I will post on this story or post up a hole new one...but I hope you enjoy what I have so far of this story right now.

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1 comment:

Anonymous said...

Nice Vorel, the first part was really good, you do have some spelling errors but that happens to everyone and if you don't mind the input there are a few small things you might want to do to make the story flow a little better. Let me know if you want my advice. :)

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